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From p_chan@shaw.ca:
Good job with the motion on the sword and the lamp.  A possible improvement could be to add some effects to the fading out of the holographic world.

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From gsingelm@t-online.de:
very good lighting in the dark places. nice idea, having a fake adventure in an amusement park
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From pterandon@yahoo.com:
Excellent characterization, setting, use of camera, story. 
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From ArizonaPain@Aol.com:
I gave the 12 for tech merit on the animation of the spider bot in the opening sequence.