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The description is fine, except that the picture just looks very geometric and
simple, and it still just looks like a gun.  There's nothing very sci-fi about 
it.

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What does this have to do with Sci-Fi? 

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Look at the old competition under tools. There is a gun in there that you should
have a look at.


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Very boring image. Needs much more detail. The gun is weirdly shaped and
with this poor perspective, I can't tell what it's supposed to look like...
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Not SF.

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Clever idea to create the textured grip.


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I think this is a good start but things just need more detail.  Also I would
maybe change the point of view so that things look a little more 3dsh.  Right
now things look pretty flat.

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Needs better textures. Like the round ribbed. Image composition is also just
too static and plain.  Have the case lying on a table or something and 
don't look at it from straight on.

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Interesting concept; gun looks sorta distorted somehow, like it's very tall.
Also, where's the trigger?  Great felt texture in the box.


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I like simplicity, but this is just a little too bland for my tastes.