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From loomsbury@yahoo.com:
I kind of like this idea.  Texturing could use work, and more detail is in order I think.  Other than that, it looks ok.

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From tony@j4tb.com:
A nice rendering except what you said. No garbage or traffic or people. 

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From whhale@nvl.army.mil:
Kind of grainy and too clean.  Love the concept.

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From Stickgod01@aol.com:
Good idea, but unfortunately, the shantytown does look far too clean and orderly. Before I read the text file, I did not realize that's what it was.
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From marlo.steed@uleth.ca:

Nice concept.  The textures and lighting might have been better.
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From mwsny001@mweb.co.za:
Ho, fellow South African! :) Very nice image!

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From StephenF@whoever.com:
This scene has a nice washed-out look to it, and the 
street looks good. The marble on the building could use 
some fine-tuning, as well as the smudges/staining on the 
corrugated buildings.

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From mar@physics.usyd.edu.au:
Quite a nice image, with some good details. The corrugated iron works well,
but the texturing could use a little refinement - though it's on the right
track. The composition is good - definitely conveys the sense of the city.
This really just needs more detailed texturing... dirt, rubbish on the road,
and maybe a car or person somewhere.


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From file:
As you already noticed, it is to clean out there .