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From loomsbury@yahoo.com:
This is nice.  The textures need some work.  I think the matrix movie poster wasn't needed.  The floor is too reflective.

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From tony@j4tb.com:
Yes your scene is very detailed. One of the better IRTC firsts I've seen. (I'm a first time submitter myself.) Though I see no flaws technically I am left sort of confused as to the message of the scene. I understand the contrast. But what does the dead body have to do with it? 

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From whhale@nvl.army.mil:
Ypu put a lot of work into this one and it shows.  Good Job

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From marlo.steed@uleth.ca:

Bricks are bit to glossy.
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From tglover@nettally.com:
Nice freshman entry!  Things are a little TOO shiny, tho.

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From StephenF@whoever.com:
Some nice work here, especially on the train.  
Interesting textures.  The lamps seem a little large, and I 
think the connection to the city topic is tenuous at best.

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From mar@physics.usyd.edu.au:
Impressive modelling and texturing. Funny, the lamps don't give the
impression of being actual light sources - the ambient and other light sources
must drown them out, which is a shame. Everything look great, except the
soles of the guy's shoes... some better texture is required here. But overall
most impressive.