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From jknepley@chisp.net:
Notable for concept.

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From loomsbury@yahoo.com:
Where's the shoreline?  The water doesn't look like water.  Basically, textures all around need to be changed.

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From pmccombs@hotmail.com:
The city stops suddenly and goes to static...

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From whhale@nvl.army.mil:
Good Idea.  The placement of the cars leads one to wonder why they are driving into and from the ocean.  A couple of ships at the pier and some trail lines from Commercial jets would have been a nice touch.

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From douge@ppe.com:
Try looking on the net for models of vehicles... 3dcafe.com has a few decent ones.  The city looks like it's merging with the water, and the road just drives right into it. 


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From Stickgod01@aol.com:
I would have fewer cars, and tone down their colors. Also, the water could be better. Good idea for a picture though.

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From StephenF@whoever.com:
Not bad, actually... this shows a lot of potential.  The 
city itself looks pretty good... I like the variety of 
shaping on the buildings... adding some basic texturing 
would make a big difference.  The cars are also not bad 
(at least from this distance), but if you're going for 
realism, I think you should cut down on the percentage 
of pastel colors, and again add some texturing.  The 
reflections look good, as does the window, although I'd 
consider pulling the camera back to show at least a little 
bit of the room itself.  I'm not sure what to tell you 
regarding the way the city disappears in the distance 
(mainly because I'm not good at fade-out effects or fog 
myself), but it looks like it could use some improvement.  
Hope all of this is helpful to you, and remember... as 
long as you're having fun rendering, you're doing it right.

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From mar@physics.usyd.edu.au:
This looks like a good idea for an image. The cars and water are too
simplistic compared to the buildings, which are quite good. Also, it's
obvious the same buildings are being used multiple times.