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From Stickgod01@aol.com:
although the scorpion looks nice, I think you went a little heavy on the fog. This is image is a good start, and good luck with your future efforts.
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From tony@j4tb.com:
It looks like a lot of work was put into the scorpion which looks good. I think the fog is unneccesary as it is doubtful you will find fog in the desert. (Then again I have never seen a desert either.) I would have killed the fog and put a nice rocky mountain range in the background. Your desert texture looks awsome nice hand made pattern.

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From spencer@early.com:
Looks pretty good.  My only major complaint would be the fog.  The thing about fog is that it gives the illusion of water particles in the air making a desert fog seem somewhat unusual in what you would think to be an environment seemingly devoid of water.
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From warp@iki.fi:
The direction of the light seems to be different from the location of the sun.
If the sun is shining through a heavy fog, the shadows should be very soft,
not sharp.

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From chris_hormann@gmx.de:
Not bad at all, really good modelling work on the scorpio, the cracks in the
ground could look deeper IMO

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From jouni@mikrobitti.fi:
Well modelled scorpion there, you'll have good use for it later :-) The
ground is a bit too creamy to be real sand - at this close range a decent
sand texture is pretty hard to find. The good composition gives some promise -
looking forward to your next entry!

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From StephenF@whoever.com:
I like the texture on the ground, and the shaping on the 
scorpion is nice (although the way the leg segments join 
together seem a little off.) 

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From albiaprime@aol.com:
Technical -  Well done for someone who is just learning.  I especially like the
              way that your sand turned out.