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From kantell@qup.com:
This gave me the willies!

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From emediez@emediez.com:
Good image, although I see it more as a courage/fear course of action. (However, that's a personal approach from this viewer :-) ) . I think that the  space effect in the sky does not match fairly the lower portion of the image. Good work.
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From charliemc@prodigy.net:

Pretty picture.
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From hgregory3@aol.com:
Artistic - A very 'powerful' image. 
Technical - You did an excellent job on the wall.  I think the rain would have
looked more convincing if it had been in shorter pieces.  At first I thought
they were wires or something
Concept - The contrast here is very easy to see.

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From steve@neurotrain.com:
A 17 T 16 C 20
Perfectly framed, well lit.  
Points were lost because of the sky and the model's 
pose.  I have used Poser often and am well aquainted 
with the it's limitations.  But the woman's right hand 
(especially because is the focus of her movement) really 
needs to be better.  I don't know if you can manipulate 
the mesh once it is in truespace, but that is what I would 
recommend.  
Technically it is a very good picture.  The woman's 
shadow looks wrong...from what you present in the image 
it should not be there.  Also the sash is too uniform..a 
bunch of different wrinkes should run through it.  And 
again the hands are both unnatural looking.
Excellent concept.

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From StephenF@whoever.com:
Nice work on the wall and collapsing floor.  The clouds 
could use some work, I think, and I'm not sure the 
gloomy, overcast sky really does a good job of 
portraying hope.  Overall, though, a nice scene, and a 
good contrast between the grayness of the top part and 
the colorfulness of the lower part.

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From gmccarter@hotmail.com:
Originally I skipped over this image as not very interesting.  When I came
back for a second look, I found there was much more to see.  The fire and
falling stones are the best part of the image.  The columns and wall seem to
be a cop-out: a way to not have to make a real background for the scene.
How about a semicircle of columns, and a hint of a city visible between
them?  I wish there was more to the scene: an explanation for the fire, an
escape path for the girl, a reason for her being here now, something.
I like the vertical format of the image, which really shows off the
contrast.

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From hfventer@ing.sun.ac.za:
The sky is a bit menacing for the effect you wanted, but 
I guess with the rain that is the right thing to do.