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From rgow@lanset.com:
There is some good work here, but IMO the amount of bright white in the image tends to dominate the rest. The red balloon is a nice touch.

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From xilo_m@hotpop.com:
Nice try! Though you will gain something by adding more details, details to make your simplicity look better (like rounded edges of cubes, etc...)...  Also, it was a bit confusing at first to understand what the tree in the middle of the road was doing there... but I finally understood that it's just a line of plants that separates the trafic, having placed your camera with a little angle on the left or the right might have do the trick!
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From marlo.steed@uleth.ca:
I liked the idea of your structure.  The problem with it was that there is a lack of sense of detail and perspective.  For instance, the lawn and fence are huge relative to the large structure.  The building needed more details (e.g. some sense of paneling - right now there is no sense for how this building was constructed- a subtle bump map and texture would have worked well).
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From hildurka@simnet.is:
I like this future vision even though I have my doubts about this kind of architecture being simple in construction. The textures are simple and clean, I like the color of the ice, very realistic. Maybe you should work more on the ground textures, the one with the checker pattern is a little over-exposed but the green area looks almost black, try to play with the ambient/diffuse settings of the material.

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From chris_hormann@gmx.de:
Not very realistic but looks somehow neat with all the reflections and the 
contrast between the green plants and the buildings.