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From jon@vulpecula.us:
Pretty good image...feels mysterious. Rather empty though.

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From helene.dumur@free.fr:
A very nice wall texture, a good idea. Perhaps this picture needs other things,
an other wall, a dead tree..

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From rgow@lanset.com:
This has a very somber moody look, that works well. Add some more objects to go
with the house and this could be excellent.

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From thegreatbambeeno@yahoo.com:
Cool, but the background could be a little better

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From hildurka@simnet.is:

A simple scene but showing great potential. I really like it. Keep up your good
work!

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From somers@w-link.net:
beautifull art.
Keep working at it.


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From pbrasolin@yahoo.it:
The house is really good, but the desert isn't realistic. (I'm 14 too) PB

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From info@michaelscholz.de:
Not bad, keep going.

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From selsek@fnac.net:
C'est assez vide. Une cam_ra plus proche du b_timent 
(qui est bien d_taill_) aurait _t_ meilleure. Le sol, le ciel, 
le d_cor sont assez vides.
Les d_tails viendront avec l'exp_rience. C'est un bon 
d_but.

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From the_dark_allies@hotmail.com:

I like this image a lot.  Only one main element to it, yet, it still stands out
and looks good to me.  Keep up the great work, I see you winning a few rounds
in the near future at this rate.
 

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From zio_tom78@hotmail.com:
Nice work! Keep learning POV and you'll create great images!

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From p_chan@shaw.ca:
The ground fog works well in creating the mood for the 
scene.  What I find missing is rubble around the house.  
A better sense of ruin could be achieved is there were 
fallen bricks visible around the part of the structure 
which is still standing.

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From glenn@mccarters.net:
Ok, this is a good start.  Good clean image with a nice color harmony.  =
A suggested improvement would be to include more of the sky in the =
composition to balance out the dull bottom parts of the image.  Of =
course, more detail would help too.  Even a small detail such as a =
flying raven would make a good focal point.


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From file:
The base of the ruins... fix it! :) Otherwise nice, but a little too much gray.