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From skipt1@aol.com:
The road needs more detail, and some transition into the sandy  terrain, like a
shoulder.  Your telephone poles look a little too much like crosses (they arent
supposed to be crosses are they?).  I do like the stepped cliffs though.
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From tek@evilsuperbrain.com:
The road looks too black, it should be grey & dusty. However the landscape is
gorgeous!

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From rgow@lanset.com:
Good ground textures. The telephone poles look a bit too thick.

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From i-mcnamara@cornellcollege.edu:
Well balanced, with good landscape and sky.  The crosses add an interesting
eerie effect.  Good textures, though the road is a bit too dark and flat.  Keep
the entries coming.
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From jacoons@ameritech.net:
The mountains at the side are excellent. The road doesn't appear to fit the rest
of the scene. 

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From ericf@foothill.net:
I like the hills and rocks in this scene, nice shape and texture.  I do wonder
though, if the road is going to run right into the distant hill, since it never
turns.  And if those are power poles, they seem a bit blocky, and no lines on
them.  The hills are so nicely done, the road needs to flow better to fit in
with them.


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From file:
To dark


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From file:
The close-up terrains are a bit "square" and the road surface is very dark.


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From file:
Very nice. I like the sky. The telephone poles are a little clunky to me- I
would make them thinner, a little more graceful. The road strikes me as odd. I
would either make it a dirt road (which would be hard-- a hieight feild, maybe>
or a block with texture addjusted just a tiny amount above the roadway? ) or
you could make it have lines down the middle and edges, to give it some visual
interest. Nicely done.